The Silencer
- Raymond Redington

- Sep 20, 2025
- 5 min read

THE SILENCER
By Johny Griffith — Architect of Chaos, Builder of Truth
Prologue: Echoes
The tongue was curled like a question mark. Blue. Lifeless. A note beside it read: “Silenced.”
Detective Marla Reyes stared at the body. No blood. No fingerprints. No motive. Just silence.
Chapter One: The Boy Who Didn’t Scream
Jamal was born in a village that didn’t exist on most maps. His father’s fists were sermons. His mother’s silence was scripture.
At night, the door creaked open. Sometimes it was his mother, bleeding. Sometimes it was his father, drunk. Sometimes it was worse.
Jamal tried to scream once. Nothing came out. Just breath. Just silence.
That night, a voice was born inside him. Not his. Not his father’s. Something else.
“You should’ve screamed.”
Chapter Two: The Language of Pain
Jamal became a student of sound.
He memorized the pitch of his father’s rage. The rhythm of his mother’s sobs. The cadence of his own breath when hiding.
He learned that pain had a language. Not words. Not grammar. But tone. Inflection. Volume.
He started cataloguing voices. Not names. Sounds.
Chapter Three: The Move
They moved to Queens when Jamal was twelve. His father said it was for “opportunity.” His mother said nothing.
School was a battlefield. Jamal didn’t speak much English. His accent was thick. His silence was mistaken for weakness.
They called him “roach.” “Ching chong.” “Curry freak.”
He didn’t fight back. He didn’t cry. He just listened.
And the voice inside him whispered: “They don’t deserve to speak.”
Chapter Four: The List
It wasn’t a list of names. It was a list of sounds.
Mr. Halvorsen’s laugh when Jamal mispronounced “philosophy.”
The wet slap of his father’s palm against his mother’s cheek.
The chant of “Ching chong!” echoing down the hallway.
The creak of his bedroom door at 2:17 a.m.
Each sound was catalogued. Memorized. Ritualized.
Jamal didn’t want revenge. He wanted silence.
Chapter Five: The First Silence
Mr. Halvorsen was retired. Still hosting a podcast on “American Values.”
Jamal didn’t kill him. He rewired the studio. Left a note taped to the mic: “Silenced.”
Halvorsen was found the next morning. Tongue removed. Vocal cords severed. No signs of forced entry. No fingerprints. Just the note. And the silence.
Chapter Six: Detective Marla Reyes
Marla Reyes didn’t believe in monsters. She believed in patterns. She believed in trauma. She believed in echoes.
She saw the Halvorsen case. Saw the note. Saw the precision.
This wasn’t rage. This was ritual.
Chapter Seven: The Voices
Jamal didn’t sleep much.
When he did, he dreamed of mouths. Open. Screaming. Bleeding syllables.
He woke up to whispers.
“You’re not silencing. You’re screaming.” “You’re becoming him.” “You are the silence.”
He gave them names:
The Child — scared, soft, always asking “Why?”
The Father — cruel, commanding, always saying “Do it.”
The Ghost — his mother’s voice, fading, pleading, “Stop.”
Chapter Eight: The Second Silence
A former classmate. Now a YouTube prankster. Famous for mocking accents and “foreign freaks.”
Jamal watched every video. Catalogued every laugh. Then he visited.
The prankster was found in his studio. Tongue removed. Note taped to the ring light: “Silenced.”
Marla saw the connection. She dug into Jamal’s past. Found the school. Found the records. Found the silence.
Chapter Nine: The Collapse
Jamal began to lose time.
He’d wake up in places he didn’t remember entering. Find notes he didn’t remember writing. Hear voices in languages he didn’t speak.
He recorded everything. Found gaps. Found edits. Found a voice—his own—saying: “I am the silence.”
Chapter Ten: The Trap
Marla set a trap.
She leaked a fake story about a teacher who abused immigrant students. She waited. She watched.
Jamal took the bait. But he didn’t kill. He confronted the teacher. Made her confess. Recorded it. Uploaded it.
Then left a note: “Silenced by truth.”
Marla realized: He wasn’t just killing. He was curating silence.
Chapter Eleven: The Mother
Jamal’s mother died in a hospice. Her voice never recovered.
She had written one thing before she passed: “I wish I had screamed.”
Jamal read it. And wept.
Then he silenced the hospice director who had ignored her cries.
Chapter Twelve: The Mirror
Jamal returned to his childhood home. Abandoned. Rotting.
He found the bedroom. Found the door. Found the silence.
He sat in the center. Recorded one final message:
“I was never trying to silence them. I was trying to hear myself.”
Marla arrived too late. Jamal was gone. No body. No blood. Just the recorder. And the silence.
Epilogue: Echoes
The killings stopped. But the silence remained.
Marla kept the recorder. Played it every night. Heard the voices. Heard the pain. Heard the silence.
And sometimes, just before sleep, she heard Jamal whisper:
“You can’t catch silence. You can only become it.” Johny Griffith — Architect of Chaos, Builder of Truth
I didn’t invent these stories. I inherited them.
They came to me in whispers—in the quiet confessions of broken men, in the haunted eyes of women who forgot how to cry, in the silence that follows a slammed door. The Silencer is fiction, yes. But it’s built from truth. Ugly, unspoken, unhealed truth.
Jamal is not one person. He’s many. He’s the boy who flinched when his father entered the room. He’s the student who stopped raising his hand because his accent made them laugh. He’s the man who learned that silence is safer than screaming.
I’ve met Jamal. In shelters. In classrooms. In mirror reflections. I’ve heard his story told in fragments—some whispered, some screamed, some buried so deep they came out sideways. I didn’t write this to glorify violence. I wrote it to expose the violence that hides in plain sight. The kind that doesn’t bleed. The kind that doesn’t leave bruises. The kind that teaches you to be quiet.
Every chapter is laced with real pain. I just added some sauce—some cinematic flair, some psychological architecture, some narrative teeth. But the bones? They’re real.
If you’ve ever felt unheard, unseen, unsafe—this story is for you. If you’ve ever swallowed your scream to survive—this story is about you. And if you’ve ever wondered what silence sounds like when it finally speaks—this story is your answer.
I don’t write to entertain. I write to provoke. To unsettle. To illuminate the shadows we pretend aren’t there.
This is not a happy ending. It’s a reckoning.
—Johny Griffith Architect of Chaos. Builder of Truth.




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